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Manik's pov
Finally the moment came that I had been waiting for...Until now it went perfect...
I knelt down before Nandini and took her hand in my hand and kissed her feathery soft hand... I gifted her a red rose too..
Next I took out the ring that I had bought for her...
And then...
Still in the kneeling position,I held her hand once again and bowed down my head
"Come on Manik you can do it.. " motivated Mr Paglu Dil...
And Mr Brain said "Soch le Manik.. agar woh tujhse pyar nahi karti hai toh kya karega tu..."
"Yaar tujhe har baar negative hi kyun bolna rehta hai...shut your mouth you mindless Brain..."
"Tu hai mindless main nahi...you bloody heart...you just pump blood okay..no need to think about me...Just leave everything on me..."
"Yeah if I leave everything on you na..tab Manik zindagi bhar single reh jayega...Kyun Manik...?"
I nodded...
"Chalo Manik I am with you...Take a deep breath and just say it at one go..."
"Manik Soch le.." Mr Brain again poked its nose..
"No Manik..iski mat sun.."
And they once again started their constant tu-tu main-main....
"Bas ho gya tum logo ka...finger on lips...and leave right now..." I shouted at them
And as they know my anger they left silently...
Finally after a long tussle I readied myself to speak those magical words...
"Nandini...I..."
I found no response and then I heard her speaking
" Dhruv!!!! What...?? Ok ok don't worry...I am coming ..."
While listening to Mr Paglu Dil and Mr Brain I didn't even realize when Nandini took her hand away from me and now she was standing at a small distance talking to someone on phone....But I could hear her...The question arises who was she talking to...? Was it Dhruv..?
Damn Dhruv....!!! 😡
Why the hell he had to call Nandini at this very moment... I just hate him and now I hate him more...
My train of thoughts were broken by Nandini's words...
"Manik I have to leave now..."
"What...? 😲 " I stated in shock
"Yeah Dhruv needs me...I need to go right now..."
"But what about the date...?"
"We can continue this show some other day...."
"Show....?? Are you out of your mind? Tumhe yeh sab kuch ek show lag raha hai...?" 🙄
"Sorry Manik...woh I didn't mean to say that... It's just that I am a lil disturbed... But right now I have to leave....Dhruv needs me..."
"Really Dhruv needs you...What about Manik NEEDS you...? What do you have to say on that...? "
"Manik you're impossible...I told you na we can continue with this date thing and all later on...But right now Dhruv is important ...."
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Ankahee Completed ✔️ (wattys 2017)
FanfictionNothing in this universe can change the path that has been prepared by destiny...So will Manik and Nandini succumb to the forces of fate..? Will their hearty feelings be unsaid forever...? Wanna know what happens next..?? then read Ankahee my first...
