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The Girl Who Stole My World

Title: The Girl Who Stole My Word

Author: Whiskeyqueenn

Genre: General Fiction

Language: English

Status: On Going

Description:

A relationship is a nest, you take your time building it and layering each stick in its proper place for a future that you are creating.

Along comes the predator, the fake, the fraud, the pretender disguised as your friend, your family.

She infiltrates into your world, pulling at the sticks that you so delicately laid. The grooming is so subtle at first that you don't understand it until you take a step back and connect all the dots.

Little by little the nest, you have built up starts to be taken away so her nest can take shape.

How do you move forward? How do you learn to trust again? How do you believe in yourself?

After the death of her best friends, Blue's life takes a series of down twisting turns that leave her on a painful journey of self-discovery about how hard life can hit. Follow Blue through the struggles of re-claiming back her life again and doing the hardest thing possible, to forgive the girl who stole her world

Review:

Wohoooo sa wakas sinipag din akong i-update to. Matagal ko na kasing gustong ilagay 'tong story na to sa wattpad goodreads.

Ang galing lang ni Author. Bawat salita tagos. Kahit na wala akong experience sa love love na yan ay sobra akong nasaktan para kay Blue.

Joshua doesn't deserve her. Yung mga lalaking ganun dapat pinuputulan ng titi! Tangna mga walang kwenta yung mga lalaking nagloloko! Mga tarantado! Boys like Josh should have their genitals cut and chopped! >:D

I was so broken for Blue. Blue I love you. You are so strong.. You are a good example for everyone. You showed us that you can do it even without Josh. You can do it even if you are a little broken. You did it for yourself and your family. I'm so proud of you. Grabe bes the best ka. I cried so hard kahit na nasa umpisa palang ako.

And for Loryale (sorry i forgot your name) I pity you. I pity you because no one loves you. I pity you because you sucks. Your character sucks! Eww! Ang sama sama mo! Puta ka! Bitch! Kainis ugali mo mang-aagaw gaga! Pakyu ka dami kong feels sayo! Inis na inis ako sa character mo sa kwento! Kawawa ka bes. Kawawa ka kasi wala kang magawa sa buhay mo. And you know what? I will wait the time when you'll realize how wrong your doings are and how your attitude stinks. Pero for the mean time tatandtarin muna kita ng mura ah! Galing mo eh! Husay mong mag brainwash! Wala e kabog kami sa kaputahan mo hahaha! (Grabe don't mind me guys I'm so pissed lang talaga don't worry.. I don't really curse that much in person. And Author i know you won't understand some of the words here but let me summarize it to you.. I'm just cursing Loryaleblabla to death because I'm so pissed at her! I hate her to the bones yayckss)

Overall the story is amazing! I learned a lot from Blue. Nakita ko yung pagbabago n'ya kung paano siya nagbago para sa sarili n'ya. Kung gaano siya kabait at kung paano siya bumangon kahit na ilang ulit na siyang nadapa. I really love this story.. I already recommended it to my sister and to my friends and I'm telling you they love it!

Queen! Thank you for sharing this wonderful story to us. :)