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now I'm sure your wondering what happen during that week of spring break well lets just say i found out that i was adopted by the browns for a couple who was in trouble. when i found this out it felt like i finally discovered why i always felt alone in the family and as if i didn't belong was because well i didn't belong with them i belonged some where else with my birth parents i knew i was different from them all even all the kids at school that's why i was happy summer was coming.
but later that Wednesday night with the moon rose high in the sky i decided to take a walk in the woods behind our house.walking outside i saw that the house next door and when i say next door i mean like two acres away i saw lights on in the house that had just been built there. it was similar to my three story light blue house with Victorian look only its color was green not blue.
anyways i was walking out back to the far end wheres there a little space where i can get through to the woods. i learned about it when i was younger i have always loved nature and the big trees that were always behind our house. i wonder if the new neighbors have any kids my age and if they will go to our school. probably. that's were all the kids got all other schools are not in our deistic so if they do have kids that are........
what tour me from my from my thoughts about neighbors was a howl in the distance.that's new was the first thought than maybe its just a kid from the neighborhood. anyways i kept walking until i was almost at the little river that ran through the forest.its really beautiful at night when the moon it full. when i cant sleep this is where i go. in to the night like its calling to me so i answer and go out.just like tonight only to nights different so how i cant put my figure on it but something is going to happen that's going to change my life forever and that's when i felt a pain through my torso and fell to the ground............................
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vote and comment plzzz i think its better than the first
bumblebee :D