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Chapter 3 loan

As i saw meg wake up she looked at me and said are you leaving me hime alone. I said no your mother already made the cookies. She still looked at me with sadness ( meg will remember this). When i made it to the the bank an old lady that was probably in her early 70 s. When the bank called me in, the old lady also came in. As they sat me down they sat the old lady next to me. They explained that only one of us is gonna come out with a loan and the other one is gonna be on a waiting list. I explained that i needed the money to move to Wisconsin. She explained that she needed the money to visit her only son child's first birthday.
-----------------------------------------well this is very interesting a move to Wisconsin or giving the lady the loan and not move. -----------------------------------------
Wisconsin - chapter 6

Give the old lady the loan -
Chapter 7