THIS PART MIGHT CHANGE WHEN IT COMES TO THE OFFICIAL BOOK BECAUSE I'M NOT GOOD AT SNEAK PEEKS OR ENGLISH....OR DESCRIPTIVE WRITING OK? OK! ENJOY!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
She is in shock by what she had done,Everything turns into a loud blur while she is trying to figure out what happened.When she hears muffled chanting,she snaps out of her train of thought,she realizes she has a muzzle,a weird wired helmet and that she is tied to a chair and lots of wires were attached to her skin,she feels a slight strike of fear when she saw that she is just above a tank of water,that moment she knows that she needs to break free....and fast.
She struggles.
And struggles.
And struggles.
Nothing.
She hears somebody yell "Drop the platform!" The second she hears that the less a second the platform that she is on drops.
At the last second she realizes.
It's electrified water.
She feels extreme pain as she enters the water,on her body and head. She is screams in pain underwater,each second the pain increases and everyone just watches....some of them has a terrified look...some of them has the look of sweet revenge and justice in their eyes.............but most of the people looks at her like.........they are enjoying it.
8 hours has passed.
She is barely even alive....she tries to breath but she is still in the water tank.........feeling the slight stings of electricity left on the water......her.......world ........slightly................becomes.........
Black.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
THAT IS LE END OF THE SNEAK PEEK!!!! I HOPE YOU ENJOYED!!!!! YEAH...bye owo
tell me what you think why won't ya
Edit:I FIXED MY PAST AND PRESENT TENSE MISTAKES...I THINK!!!!
293 words
YOU ARE READING
The Origin of "Six"
De TodoThis tells the origin of a child. That's it. (THIS BOOK IS GONNA BE ALLL FROM ME BRAIN SO ORIGNAL CHARACTERS AND SHET....YEEEEET also This is my first time trying out descriptive /narrative writing,opinions in the comments 👌)
