100 shades of Poetry

would it be ok?!

Would it be ok if i took some of your time?
Would it be ok if i wrote you a little rhyme?

Would yoi agree if i opened my heart?
And Would it be ok if i took on my part?

Of being your other, and showed you a view...
that only one like me can do...

Would it be ok if i could make you smile?
Or that i could hug you for a little while?

Would you agree if i could kiss your face?
Or would you agree that i could replace?

All the things that occured in your past...
Or this wish that im about to cast...

Of all the things that just would not do...
And vow to be faithful and always be true?

Would it be ok if i could stare staight into your eyes?
And say to you "no more lies?"

To pull you close and to wisper in your ear...
And tell you that our feelings are nothing to fear?

Would it be alright if i could find a way...
To long for it all and to say...

To tell you that there's nothing else id rather do...
Than to spend the rest of my life loving you?!!?!!

thank you

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