critisize me

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if my lyrics dont make sence
and my rhyms are too old
why did your friend tell me you
took the first one and did it stole

you just saying things
and tries to offend me
but it wont work
since im beyond degree

i hate the people that watch
and still make sure they see
but yet still the start off by
critisizing me

you see i cant even soell the word right
i cant even lie
so its best if i dont hang around
anymore and say goodbye

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