Author: writinh
Genre: Vampire
Rating: +++
Afer reading 3 chapters, the plot seems a bit underdeveloped, but not a bad idea overall.
The grammar and spelling only have a few errors, so this is a fairly well written book.
The sentences are mostly the same length, they could use some variation.
The characters are also a little bit underdeveloped. I feel like the story is moving too quickly for character development.
I would love if the book went into more detail, such as emotions, what's happening around the characters, etc...
The blurb is well written.
There's one thing that really bothers me. Antisocial does not mean shy or introverted or not social or against society or anything like that. Antisocial Personality Disorder is a psychological condition in which the person basically has no conscience. They can, in fact, be very social people. Common names for antisocial personality disorder include the following: psychopathic, sociopathic, and psychotic.
These considerations have led me to give Ice Queen a +++ out of 5.
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