Nighttime | +++++

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Author: loveeboat

Genre: Short Story

Rating: +++++

This book is exceptionally well written. I didn't find any typos or gramatical errors, but then, I was distracted because I was actually interested in the book.

Five out of five!

Tips? I think the emotions could be shown a little more, maybe a little more seeing into her mind and feelings. Honestly that's just my personal writing style, though. Also, the title is iffy.

I would've read this book if I had found it, though, so...

+++++ is the rating for this short story.

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 21, 2017 ⏰

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