Okay.
It's time to rant. Like now.
I've added a BVB fanfiction to my library. 3 pages in, I already know it's fucking T E R R I B L E .
First of all, whoever wrote it had never heard of punctuation. There are no periods, no commas, not even an exclamation point.
Jeez. I know my shit isn't spell checked or edited, but I try.
I hate when people just write super long paragraphs and dont use any punctuation it seriously pisses me off especially when you can CLEARLY tell the person was just being lazy but whatever
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No punctuation there. It quite horrifying. I mean, maybe I'm just being the grammer police, but not a single fuck was given.
A good story is more than the story line itself.
Jeeeeez.
Oh and the story is also lacking details. Like, tf. I like how the guy JUST found out her mom was beating her, and 5 minutes later, they're at his house and he just so happens to have a spare bedroom with a bed, a dresser, everything a girl needs. No, it doesn't work. Shit just doesn't happen like that, you feel me?
OH YEAH.
Have y'all read Black Veil Assassination?
I read it. And I was absolutely livid.
First of all, I understand that you don't like One Direction. But forreal, writing a story, basically fantasizing their murder is so far beyond immature, I cannot put it in words. Whoever wrote it, you're nothing but a child. You're a terrible person.
Second of all, Black Veil Brides, Sleeping with Sirens, Pierce the Veil, all those bands involved in the story, they are HEROS. Good people. People look up to them, they've saved lives! So how fucking dare you even consider writing a story making them look like such terrible people! Shame on fucking you! I don't even want to be on the same planet as you. I'm disgusted. You should be ashamed. Writing a story about my favorite bands, my sisters favorite bands, a lot of people favorite bands being murderers. I hope one day, you look back and see what a childish and low thing it was for you to write such things.
The end.
