This is my first fanfiction. I posted part of it on my One Direction instagram @missisabellarosa a while ago, and it was asked by one of my followers. I am really sorry but I have forgotten their username, but when I remember I will try tag them or something. Anyway, I hope you enjoy... please be nice, this is my first fanfic ever!!
The Surprise- Fan Fiction
It was Saturday and Louis was acting strange. He kept glancing at his phone and playing with the sleeves of his jacket.
"What's wrong?" you asked, pausing the movie for the fifteenth time in a row.
He looked over at you and smiled nervously.
"Nothing, love. Everything is great. Let's just watch the movie." He said, but you were still unsure about everything.
That evening, he said he had to go out and you became even more uneasy about everything. But he was always trustworthy, and was probably just stressed with work and planning his trip to America.
But you really started to worry when you received his message late that night, after walking up and down your bedroom.
Louis: I am really sorry I am so late. I am staying at Niall's house tonight. I will tell you everything tomorrow.
You threw your phone on the bed and a tear trickled down your cheek.
Was he cheating on you?
Slipping into a cosy night dress, you slip into bed and cry yourself to sleep.
The Next Day...
You woke up at nine thirty and reached over and touched the pillow where Louis's head should have been. You sighed, and got up. After showering and getting dressed you checked your phone for the 50th time that morning. But this time you had a couple of messages, but not one from Louis.
Niall: Louis wanted me to ask you to meet him at Harry's house. He has something to tell you.
Heart beating fast you see that Harry has also sent you a message.
Harry: Babarcue at my house. Lunch Time. All afternoon. You have to come.
Confused and puzzled, but also one to never turn down meeting up with your favourite boys you agree and go down to make yourself a coffee.
Once you were completely ready to go, you grab your bag, your car keys and jumped into your car.
When you arrived at Harry's you found all the lights were out and everything was quite. Were they playing a joke on you? You rang the doorbell but there was no answer. You rang it again. No answer.
Just when you were thinking of leaving your phone beeped, as another message came in.
Harry: We are in the garden, the side gate is open. Sorry, we are a little puddled in the back, but make your way over here.
You smiled, but also felt confused. What were these boys up to? Was it all a joke?
Being the curious girl that you are, you decide to go see what was going on, and to see if it was really one big prank.
Just as you entered the garden you hear a shout of, "SURPRISE!!! SURPRISE!!"
Harry, Louis, Niall, and Liam jumped out from behind a shed, chairs, trees and bushes. And they were not the only ones there. Many of your other friends were there too.
"What is going on?" you asked, surprised.
"Happy Early Birthday." Louis said, giving you a big hug, "I have been planning this for ages and then things were not going to plan and that's why I was acting so nervous yesterday."
Tears formed in your eyes and you kissed Louis on the cheek.
"I love you!" you say, hugging him tighter.
"I love your more!" Louis replied, kissing you.
"Let's get thissss parttyyyy started." Harry shouted, a can of beer in his hand and smiling at all his friends around him.
"Shut up, Harry. You are ruining their moment." Liam shouted, nudging his friend.
"Sorry. I'm just exicted. We have not been together like this in ages." Harry grinned, taking a gulp of his beer.
"I have another surprise for you." Louis said, "Close your eyes."
"Hey, really? Nothing could be better than this. Everything is great. Harry is right, let's start the party." You say, walking over to the table that was covered with plates of snacks.
"Put that pretzel down, close your eyes, and follow me."
Louis grabbed your hand, and begged you to close your eyes, then led you inside.
"Tell me what on earth is going on." You said, trying to pretend to be annoyed even though you were excited and also nervous.
Suddenly you heared scratching noises and quite mewing noises.
"You can open your eyes now." Louis said.
You opened your eyes to see all the boys and your friends around you.
"What is all this about?" you asked, looking around at them all. Some of them held their phones at the ready, as if ready to film something.
"Look over there!" Louis said.
You looked and saw Zayn carrying in a huge box with three small moving things inside.
It was then you fell on your knees as inside the box, that was layed down in front of you were three kittens. One was brown, one was white and the third was black.
"Are they... are they for me?" you asked, not sure if you should laugh, cry or smile.
"Yep! Choose one!" Louis grinned.
"Oh my gosh, they are all so cute. I can't choose one. Do I have to chose!"
"No! They are all yours. Well ours!"
"REALLLLLYYY!!! OH, LOUIS, I LOVE YOU SOOOOO MUCH!!!"
"I know. I know. I love you too, princess." Louis smiled, kneeling down beside you.
"What are their names? Are they boys or girls?"
"Harry and I got them, with a little help from Niall." Louis smiled over at his friends behind them.
"Hey, when did you three go kitty shopping without me!" Liam joked, folding his arms and pretending to be hurt.
"Well, you were busy and Louis wanted to get them for ages and as you know I love cats. And Niall, begged us to include him." Harry chucked, winking at Niall.
Louis rolled his eyes and turned back to you.
"So, what are you going to call them princess."
"I want to call the white one Nialler, after Niall. The black one Lou, after you because I think he is my favourite one" you say winking g at Louis, "And the brown one, as she is the only girl, I will call her Henrietta."
"Perfect!" Louis said.
"Can I hold one?" Harry asked, moving foreward.
"Of course you can!" you say, while stroking Henrietta.
"Well, is the food ready?" asked Niall, "I am so ready to eat!"
"Yeah, we can go eat!" Liam said, "But don't ruin the fun of kittens."
"We can all go outside and eat." Louis said, "Let's take the kittens out too, unless we won't ever get those two away from them long enough to eat!"
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