is it clearer?
is it louder enough?
my feelings exploded
even how shallow
this poem shows,
you didn't, care
you denied
so what's the point?
of hoping someone will notice;
it's the end; missed(sorry for inactivity, busy irl because school.. fml)

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ripple
Поэзия[ ripple » a small wave ] welcome to the hopeless world of jillian. tell me immediately if my grammar is wrong, let's correct my mistakes (: highest ranking 346 in Poetry as of 4th of August [ completed | toosdays | 2017 ]
point
is it clearer?
is it louder enough?
my feelings exploded
even how shallow
this poem shows,
you didn't, care
you denied
so what's the point?
of hoping someone will notice;
it's the end; missed(sorry for inactivity, busy irl because school.. fml)