Hello!
I read through the story the other day and thought to myself that the way I wrote this is so shit. So I was thinking I should start the whole story again, and maybe take some bits out. I will be taking out a character or two such as Marcus and Lucy because I found them pretty pointless. But of course Maz, Sam, Caspar, Lily Alfie and Alice will be in it. I will also be changing the part of Lily from Alfie's cousin to just Alice's bestfriend as I think I could make the story line a little better if she was her friend.
Thank you for reading it though, but I promise this one will be much much better!
-love Alice x
