Alright, greetings fellow readers! It is me of corse, Vicious the killer.
Now I know you have all had your finish with the story, the standing ovation, and whatnot, but. but. I have looked over the story myself and I have found myself... rather not pleased with how it was written. A universe of plot holes and incorrect grammar mistakes have been thrown along the fan fiction. One day, I got fan mail from the story- (in which I get all the time)- and we had a little chat about the story. So we're going to cast a vote.
Here's what I recommend doing to the story. Redoing it. I want it rewritten, some main pinpoints will still be left alone, but I wish to have character buildup and more... events. Simple things- and it to be proofread. I will go by chapter after chapter and delete them to be rewritten presumably... better. On the other behalf, in which the fan that I will leave anonymous for now, says to leave it alone, and keep it the way it is. I couldn't decide, and she/he said to leave it to all of you- the readers. Well that pretty much wraps it up for me, and I hope you will take into consideration for the better however you believe it to be. Comment below your vote, and have a terrifying night my little readers.Killer to your service,
~ ★Vicious the killer★
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Vicious the Killer-(a Jeff the killer love story)
RomanceVicious is not an ordinary teen. She believes herself to be one of the most weirdest and psychotic people in her home town. But in her thoughts and dreams, she sees this man.. Jeff the killer to be exact. Not long after, reports in the news paper id...