Hey All,
So this is not a chapter, nor am I begging for votes. I have been wondering lately why I seem to have a ton of reads yet little to no feedback. As a writer, it is very hard to improve without peoples feedback. I want to continue writting, and will finish the stories that I have but I will not be posting extra chapters. If you want the extra chapters, here is what I need from you guys. Feedback, if I can have five people anwer these five questions for me tonight I will have a new chapter up tonight, or tomorrow morning at the latest.
1. What do I need to improve? I know that I am not perfect, I want to here from you to what you think I am doing wrong.
2. What do you like about this story? Yea I want to know what you like as well, this could be as simple as a charecter. I keep these things in mind as I advance in the story.
3. Where do you think this story is going to go? Have a suspision about what I am going to do, I want to hear it. Maybe my writting is giving away too much.
4. Ideas? I love to hear your ideas, there are days that I struggle with what should happen next.
5. Why I should finish this story or why I should stop this story?
What is more whoever answers these before the next chapter with the most helpful feed back will get a dedication.
thanks for reading
toria
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Forever Tide: My True Identity
FantasyHuman her entire life Emilae finds out that she is a mermaid just before her 16th birthday. Emileana Vara Glaszka, princess of Atlantis to be exact. With little knowledge of the war zone, and power struggles going on beneath the oceans waves she is...