Hey everybody who has read this story. Thanks to reading. I was reading myself today and realized that it's needs to be re-written. Would you guys like me to rewrite it? Would you read it if I do?

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Hey everybody who has read this story. Thanks to reading. I was reading myself today and realized that it's needs to be re-written. Would you guys like me to rewrite it? Would you read it if I do?