Review by Ely.
Overall Rating: ★★★★
Title: Diverse Feelings
Author: Sweet_Kkiwii
Summary: Seventeen year old Malona Parker and her childhood best friend Noah Slater have been feuding for the past two years. After fifteen years of close friendship, they both start to grow feelings for each other romantically, and start to date. Two years later, when they pass each other in the hall, they act as if the other is invisible. What they both don't know about the other is that they are both having second thoughts about their breakup, even if Noah has a specific blonde dangling on his arm 24/7 that goes by the name of Joyce Raymond-his current girlfriend. In the public eye, they act as if they hate each other. But what happens when Malona starts to notice the butterflies she gets in her stomach or the tingling feeling she gets from head to toe when he walks past her and scowls?
Genre: Fantasy
Status: Ongoing
First Impression: I really love your cover and I love Kat Graham so it's a win win situation! :)) I wasn't too sure about your story when I read the description. I'm going to be honest, I thought it was going to be cliché. The summary wasn't a huge attention getter; once I opened your book and began to read the first chapter, I was hooked! I really enjoy how neat everything is. Grammatically, you are practically completely there. There are a few things, here and there, to be fixed. Nothing major. Just things like commas and words that could be replaced or omitted if redundant. I love the characters! The name Malona is very unique and now my favorite name! Every character is well developed! Descriptions in the chapters are fantastic. I love the aesthetics you've made, including the text messages and tweets. Also, the gifs are perfect! I love these little touches because they make the story feel so real and engage the audience. The dialogue is well written, the only thing I would really suggest to work on is: your editing and your summary. Everything else is perfect. I hope your writing journey flourishes! I hope this review was helpful, you certainly gained another reader! ✨
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