This is my first story, so please don't hate. This is based off of, Cars 1 and 3 (Car 2 was bad in my opinion.) Anyways please give me some ideas, and tell me what I did wrong, this is made on a phone 87% of the time, other time on a computer. Anyw...
Hey peeps! This is gonna be my first story, so please no hate please, but id you would give me ideas, and ect. That would be nice, and tell me what I am doing wrong! Have a good day and enjoy the story! ~~~~~~~~~¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤¤~~~~~~~~~ Lightning McQueen, is going a mild 199, but his max speed is 198, and he is in 3rd place, there is a rookie, and Jackson storm in the 1st. Lightning McQueen is in 3rd place and he is doing a good job considering he is a older car, (like Doc but not that old.) But out of no-where his wheel pops,and he was going 210 miles, and he does about 4-5 flips. This what he looks like:
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McQueen was getting taking to the hospital.
----------------Meanwhile------------------ At Raideator Springs
"McQueen crashed?" Mater asked crying. "I'm afraid so Mater" Said Doc (I know he isn't alive in the 3rd movie but eh.) "I just hope it isn't the end for him." Added Sherrif. "But if it is, he had a good run, after all they are empty cups." Added Cruz. (Yes Cruz moved to Raidatior Springs.) ----------------5 months later-------------- Lightning McQueen has finally healed up, but he looks like he did when he after his crash in cars 3, the gray paint.
"You okay lightning?" Doc asked "Yes, it just I don't know if I should go back to racing." Says McQueen. "McQueen you decide when you retire. Old or young." Said Doc. "You know what? Your right. I am going back, to racing!" McQueen says ~~~~¤ Time skip a week~~~~~~~ "Hey doc, can you get everyone?" Asked McQueen "Sure." Says Doc ------3 minutes later-------- "Okay everyone, I have a anoucment....... I am going back to racing!" McQueen said half yelling. "Way to go buddy!!" Mater yelled and other people say stuff like that, and ect. You get the idea.
