This is my first story, so please don't hate. This is based off of, Cars 1 and 3 (Car 2 was bad in my opinion.) Anyways please give me some ideas, and tell me what I did wrong, this is made on a phone 87% of the time, other time on a computer. Anyw...
McQueen got a new paint job, he looks like this now:
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But instead of the Rust-eze on his his hood its 95. Anyways on to the story. ------------At the race stauim---------- I think broadcaster named are bob and David idk.
"It looks like a great day for a race, right bob?" Said David "It's does bob, and oh my good gravy! Look McQueens back!" Bob said "WHAT?!" Jackson yelled. "Buggitty-buggitty lets go racin!!!!" McQueen, is at 3rd place staring Jackson is at front and some random person is in the 2nd place. McQueen taakes of at the speed of 220 miles per hour, and already by Jackson storm. "How in cars sake are you so fast?!?!" Jackson storm yelled "Training." McQueen says as he speed of at a speed 250 miles per hour. "Wow McQueen must of done a lot id training if he's going 250 miles per hour. McQueen was on the 70's lap when everyone else on there 20's lap. But Jackson is on his 50's lap. There are 150 laps. "I think McQueen got this in the bag don't you David?" Says bob. "Yeah proably. But I don't know you never know." --------------------------- Jackson Storm was gettin salty, so when McQueen went by him for the 100's time he smashed McQueen into the wall, and McQueen does the trick Doc, and Cruz does. ----------------- At the pit stop "Wow, he's using the trick I used when I raced." Said Doc "You can do it!" Yelled Mater. -Using the mic, thing.- "If you keep this up you can do this, but next lap come in for pit stop." Says Doc. "You got it." McQueen says as he comes into the pit-stop. He gets wheels and gas, and goes at 370 miles. -------2 minutes later-------- "And McQueen is done!!!!!!" Yells Bob
