Hey friends,
I was in such a massive rush and caught up in the thrill of publishing this story that I never really proof-read any of it and definitely did not think any the characters through properly. So I'm going to keep this story published, however it's going to go through some editing. I would love it if you started the story again, from the beginning, because here's what you should expect:
1) clearer dialogues
2) a better understanding of the characters
3) a better understanding of the scenarios
4) a lot more character development
5) more of Jayden's viewpoints; she will give you her thoughts on the situation and her standpoint.
6) corrected grammar
7) overall, a better plot.
8) and there might be a slight change of plans as I thought up a plot twist or two today. I'm not entirely sure if I'm going to include them as I don't like disappointing you guys but we're going to see
A VERY IMPORTANT NOTE:
NOT ALL STORIES END ON A SUNNY DAY. SOME END UNDER THE STORM. SOME END UNDER THE SEA. SOME END IN THE MIDDLE OF A BLIZZARD. SOME END ON A FUNERAL. SOME END ON A DIVORCE. IT IS LIFE. NOT A FAIRYTALE, AS MUCH AS I HATE BEING A KILLJOY/BUZZKILL.
in the famous words of Jon Foreman,
You breathe it in: the highs and lows. We call it living.
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Dancing on the Moon {h.s.}
Fanfiction"You know that one New Radicals song? Someday We'll Know? Good song. Good song," I said, looking down and pursing my lips in thought. "What makes you say that?" he asked as his little signature smirk began to appear when I looked up. "Because Haro...
