18 suspect murder mystery
"Get the ambulance!" I screeched. I was pissed. I had to come from my ballet class that melane didn't show up for, to akeems castle because of some incident with a mystery killer. I didn't fully know what happened yet, but I do know one thing, we need to fire everyone in the police department. 3 years! Three and a half years I have been working as an FBI, and nobody told me there was a killer on the loose! I should be one of the first to know. How long has this been going on, you ask? Two months! When did I hear about it? Forty-seven minutes ago! I sighed in frustration as Ulises took out his iphone 395, and dialed 411-394610438.
"Hello? Yea this is Ulises Gomez. Oh no you did not just put me on hold! Do you know who I am? I am an FBI investigator who could sue the whole police department....with some help that is. Yea that's what I thought. We are at Akeem Answer's mansion and we need you here now I'm sure you know the address already. You don't!!!!! He's the richest man... wait correction, BOY in new York!!!! Aww heck naw aint nobody got time for this put me on the phone with the main doctor please."
"Ulises just give me the phone!"
"No no, I got this!"
"Ulises!"
"I said no!!!!!!!!!!"
I rolled my eyes as a white Dodge Charger pulled up. I looked to see melane, jumping out with Diana on her heels. It's about time, and I can't wait to tell melane off about missing class when the recital is in two months.
Before I got a chance to say anything to them, I heard gasps, oohs, and ahhs. I looked at the complete stranger beside me, and he was facing in the direction of a beautiful shiny black stretched limousine gliding into an available spot on the street. The deep black door cracked open a few seconds later, and a well clothed leg appeared out of the door. It swung open fully now, and the mystery person stood, showing himself. My eyes trailed up the body that was dressed in a suit and tie. When I got to the face, I was... impressed.
"Da'vaine?" melane asked in complete and utter shock.
"mhmm" he replied, taking his shades off proudly. He walked up to us, trying to pull off that long cool stride and failed miserably, ending up looking like a chicken having a seizure. (lol rylando u know what I'm talking about)
A voice spoke up beside me. "okay, listen, this has gotten out of hand. I want the rent you owe me for paying for that limousine or im taking it back!" Didi said, glaring at him. A grin formed on my face as she said this, and soon I couldn't hold in my laughter.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!" the sound flew out of my mouth before I could help it and soon Diana and melane were laughing either with me or at me. I fell to the ground clutching my stomach from the look on da'vaines face.
"Okay, fine!" he said hushing her and scolding me. I knew it was too good to be true. Davaine could never have a limo with his own money.
After the laughter died down and the smiles disappeared and we meant business again.
"what happened?" Diana asked, holding a serious face.
"well, from what I know, akeem is knocked out, not any major injuries, but we still need him in the hospital." I replied.
"Well, isn't that what we are here for? We have to investigate." Da'vaine said, stepping towards the moat. "how are we going to get over this? There are freakin' crocodiles in here!"
"Whoah, woah, woah, woah, woah" melane said.
"Hold your horses" Diana added on.
"Don't get your underwear in a curl." I said. (only da'vaine understands what I'm saying here, and yes, I got you back and it counts)
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18 suspect mystery
HumorI am writing this story as a gift to my favorite class. The characters are all real and I chose their jobs that fit perfectly, and also not perfectly. I gave people a change. The computer geniuses are not very interested in any of that at all. They...