Original Songs

Idk what i should name this any suggestions

This is my newest song I hope you guys like it. Its kinda got a little bit of rock and a little bit of a pop feeling to it so I'm gonna say its a mixture of these to types of genres in music so yeah i hope you guys like it. Comment down below what you think of the song to i would love to hear your guys feedbacks on it. Ok so i can't really find the rhythm  But i know that when i get to actually finding the music notes, and the rhythm i know for sure it's gonna start off slow, and then the pace of the song the beat, and the bass will pick up in the song but when the song comes to an end it slows down, and then it just ends with a slow and steady beat to it.

I may not know what's gonna happen

In the end well smile

Then forget why we held on

Lost in our heads

Trying to come out of our minds

But memories embedded in my mind

We're still trying to forget

Mending the peices of our broken hearts back together

Teaching us how to smile

But what's left is fake

Remembering how to speak

Choosing not to bleed

Screaming at our walls for help

Looked at it as if it was our last resort

Trying to be whole again

Since now you are gone

No one's there to even care

When things go wrong

Needed you the most

But you left me all alone

(Chorus #1)

Fighting these battles 

All is lost

Winning these wars inside myself

Taming the voices stuck in my head

Escaping my mind and soul 

Now i'm free to be me and only me

Don't give up

We'll be there for you

So you can win your battles too

You are stronger than you think 

Fighting everything in your mind

But when we stick together

We'll all be fine

Cuz we got your backs

Just like mine

(Chorus #2)

Never give up

We scream and shout

Breaking our barriers down

Fighting our wars

Taming our beast inside

We may be lost

But we are strong

Just never give up

We will fight these battles

And win them all

So we can finally be free too

Just don't give up

These battles won

We are stronger no matter what

Remembering why we held on

For so long

Makes us stronger

One by one

(Chorus #3)

Makes us stronger

One by one

We are finally free

But never give up

So that's the end of my newest song i wrote um what did you guys think i'm curious to see if i still got my songwriting touch with me??????