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Close your eyes, imagine you're alone on the beach at sunrise. What beach are you on? Where are you in the world? The sand feels spongy underneath your feet. You close your eyes and hear the comforting sound of the crashing waves coming on to shore. As you open your eyes the ground is collapsing beneath you. Are you scared? Or do you just let the sand carry you to your next destination? As the sand slowly swallows you up, you fall onto an interesting surface. What  is this material You slowly try to stand up but a pain restrains you from moving. What is this pain? Where does it occur? And what do you do to stop it?

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Hello everyone this is my first story on here so I hope you enjoy so far. this is a project for school that I was doing and I really like the idea. If you guys aren't familiar with the idea of a second person story its kind of like a mind story where every question represents something. 

beach: the beach you are on and where you are in the world represents a place that is like your safe haven

Sinking: When you sank it represented how you felt about your future. If you were reluctant it showed that you were hesitant and don't really want to know about your future. If you gave in it showed that you want to know what your future holds.

Pain: the pain represents the most vulnerable spot on your body. Say you have a very fragile back, that represents that your life is not balanced. The back is like the support beam of your whole body. 

Anyway I hope you enjoyed and I'll hopefully be continuing it son. Comment below what you guys got!

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