The no one

Chapter 1 (finally)

A/n: Okay so I know you want to just read already, but I'm here to day that this will be my spin off on the story. Until I ether find the original, or someone helps with the story line on what had exactly happened. This is what you guys are getting.
On another note, Naruto in this is now "Naru" as in SHE is still named Naruto but because she is female her teammates and those she makes friends with call her Naru.
Another thing, there will be spiders in this, along with other weird and seeming ly random creatures. It will make sence in time don't worry. It will. And that will be it from this authors note. There will be questions at the end of this that I would like answered so I can give a good book that yiu guys are happy to read. I will also have an area for you to give me some questions that I can answer in the next chapter. Anyway someone do the disclaimer please.....
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Anyone?

*lucas crawls closer on the desk*
Ms. Shadow does not own Naruto, if she did there would be more; Yaoi, sommons, weapons, and the Akustuki wouldn't be the bad guys.

*thanks lucas*
Now on to the story (everyone mutters "finally")

     The sun had just set and families are now entering there homes to wash up before supper. This is common in the peaceful village of konaha, the village hidden in the leaves. What people don't know is that while they are sitting down for  dinner a Kumo Nin is caring a sack that has two young girls gagged and confused.

     One of them is obviously a Hyuga, with her pupil-less violet eyes, and her raven hair. Her pale skin was bruised around her arms and her cheeks had tear tracks running down them. She was only around six. She stared at her sack companion with child curiosity as she had calmed herself around 15 minutes ago.

     Her companion had bright blond hair and deep blue eyes, both only able to be compared to the Fourth Hokage's, and a beautiful tan complexion. She also seemed to be only six, maybe seven. This girl didn't have tears running down her face, but a sad look when looking at her. It was when the man had stopped moving did the girls stop looking at each other and instead tried to listen to what was going on outside of the sack.

".... you- ...."

"Yes-..... both-.... slightly bruised"

"That's fine-.... long-..... both alive"

"They are, O........."

"Exssssselent"

     Both girls then had wide eyes as they stared at each other, a slight hopelessness going through the air of the bag. The Hyuga's breath caught in her throat when she felt the bag begin to shift as they were picked back up again.

     They were then traveling for about 3 hours, but for the girls it felt like eternity, before they where both dumped out of the bag. The both fell ungracefully onto a cold, hard cement floor that seemed to be in a dungeon of some sort. They looked up to see a tall man with a blueish pale skin, long black hair, and yellow slit pupiled eyes.

    The girls scooted as far away from the man as they could in the small cell, and they clung to each other. Afraid that he was ether going to kill them or the other person with them. The man only chuckled before he left the cell. Not bothering to chain them up just yet. Instead he walked down the hall and entered another cell, where screams started to echo down.

      Tears streamed down the blond girls checks at that moment and that is when the Hyuga started to panic. Only after the screams had stopped and they were sure that the man had left, did one of them decided to speak. Nither of them where sure who said it, but they both agreed.

"I want to go home"

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A/n and that's all for now folks. Sorry if it wasn't what you were expecting and it sucked. The reason it is small is because I'm not sure of you guys want to change it. Now for the questions.

1) did you guys like it?

2) if you didn't, why?

3)*in sarcastic voice* who do you think took them?

4)*still sarcastic* who do you think the girls are?

5)*not sarcastic* who do you think the other person is? The one that was in the other cell screaming.

6) does it need more details?

7) anything you what me to answer?

Also happy early update!!!!
And that is all fellow dragons, Shadow out,
Duces

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