I tend to use the Spanish punctuation since it's more natural for me: we mark the beginning of the dialogue with a hyphen every time a character speaks and put thoughts between quotation marks. This way we avoid using verbs like "he said," "she thought," constantly.
But I've been told that it may confuse English readers so I'll try to use English punctuation from now on in my new stories. Please, forgive me if my old stories are difficult to read for this reason.
As always, if you find any spelling or grammatical mistakes, if a sentence or a paragraph seems odd (probably because I'm not thinking in English but translating from Spanishin my mind) feel free to correct me. Remarks, constructive criticism, suggestions,advices... all that can help me to improve my stories will be welcome.
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The beer tap (Terra Juana fan fic)
FanficA disastrous blind date turns into the hottest night. Smut one-shot.