Two drowning people can't save each other.
All they can do is drag each other down.
Romeo and I start'd sinking as
Soon as we consummated our first kiss.
Drowning. What does it mean? The word drowned
Comes from the old Norse word drukkna, which means
To be drown'd. Drowning: death caused by being
Underwater and not being able to Breathe.
That's how it feels to lose the person
You love, it's like drowning, feeling helpless,
Being whole and empty at the same time
While struggling to breathe. I am sinking,
Not only sinking but, drowning in my
Selfish emptiness, fighting endlessly
For something as simple as a breath.
What Do I do? Do I continue fighting
The raging battle inside me and try
To stay afloat? Or do I just give up?
End it all? To me, Romeo was more
Than just a person. He was a place I
Finally felt at home. My Romeo,
Destroy'd by poison, but not generous
To let me stay within his caving walls,
Confiscating my sweet relief. But the
Downside to the taste of pure happiness
Is that, like a drug, a glimmer of hope,
It leaves you craving more. They say death is
Not the greatest loss in life. The greatest
Loss is what dies inside us while we live.
However, they don't say how it feels with
A concoction of both. Romeo is
Dead, home is gone. What is the appeal of
Living with no home? The gleaming dagger
Sheathed to Romeo fills me with a
Conflicting mixture of trepidation
And justification. Something I must
Acknowledge even if, like acid on
Metal, it little by little, corrodes
Inside of me. I will come home to you
Husband, my home, my Romeo. Drowning.
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Drowining
PoetryInterpretation of the death scene in Romeo and Juliet. I wanted to capture and expand the thoughts and emotions going through Juliet and bring them to life better than the original Shakespeare text. BTW each line has 10 syllables just like Shakespea...