born a beast

hi I'm Taylor this is my first wattpad story so please be gentle with me and I want your help on where this story goes I have the first couple of chapters but not much more so I want input and ideas this is my baby so any help would be great even if it's just a grammar error

Jake's p.O.V

Hi, I'm Jake

nice to meet you I have lots to talk about but right now I gotta run. No not like I have to go already, more like I'm being chased by the most beautiful girl in the world. Alyssa Grey ( no not Christian Grey's sister). I bet you confused huh? like your wondering why I would run from a beautiful girl and to answer you question Alyssa is my best friend as well as the love of my life. she doesn't know But you can keep a secret right I mean I trust you...

where was i? Oh yes beautiful best friend chasing me. why was she chasing me? because I have a really really big secret and she found out. oh, I guess telling you the secret might help the story along so here we go I'm only telling because we're friends ok.

My secret is ...... I am a Vampire.

oh save your groans and whining for some other time I know these stories are over done and I'm sorry If I turned out to. be just another check on your do not read list.

hell I hate vampires and vampire stories as much as the next guy.

No this isn't a tragic I was bit and now I'm a monster forever nope. more like I am the first ever vampire to be born a beast, I was born dead. strange right my dad thought so to when I was born. talk about a bloody accident.. it's a pun go ahead laugh. ...... ok I'm not that funny sorry

see I wasn't always aware of my illness you could say I found out on my sixteenth birthday when my dad said happy birthday your dead. what a asshole right?

so that's more than Alyssa knows so yeah. let me explain Alyssa 1. she's my best friend and I love her 2. she is president of the Edward and Bella shipping club

3. and fangirl over anything vampire

so she found out not by me telling her but by a hug my fangs popped out and she just smelled so delicious I just couldn't help it I just wanted on tiny bite is that so bad.

I know I know which is why I'm glad she pushed me away before I could do anything. the look on her face when she saw my fangs was angry, scared, suprised, then excited. and now I'm running so now your caught up.

oh one more thing I'm kinda a slow vampire which is why Alyssa caught up and Is sitting on my chest giggling about how I'm the slowest vampire ever.

now the mad look as she pokes my rib" Jacob Anthony Briton how could you hide this from me? "

" look I'm sorry Alyssa please don't be mad... no one is supposed to know my dad would kill me" I say and she gives me a look she hates my dad but I'll explain why later" don't give me that look I'll tell you everything at my place ok?"

that makes her happy and we go to my place.

~~~~~~~~AUTHOR NOTE~~~~~~

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I'll update this weekend or soon I promise