Memories, A flashback
That takes you back
To those beautiful moments
You wish never ends
A treasure box,
With pebbles and rocks.
A starry night,
And a flash of light,
A beautiful scenery,
Or a terrible misery!?
A lovely painting,
Calling for ending.
A soothing music,
Or a dilemma fix!?
A worldly pleasure,
Or a painful closure!?
Some childhood flashes,
Now in ashes.
Some school time notes,
Now a paper boat.
The eighth wonder,
Or a dreadful thunder!?
A beautiful dream,
Or a nightmare scream!?
~Anjali~
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Heyaa everyone, I am back again with a not so good poem, but this is my first atempt and wrote it on a go. At sometimes rhyming may sound forceful, but as I said I am not good at this, just a random try.
Please give your honest reviews on this poem. Mujhe pata hai mere watty friends itne jhoothe hai ki achi nahi bhi ho gi to bhi bol denge achi hai. Mujhe pata hai ye achi hai. But achi ke alava aur kya hai wo likho.
Burai nahi karni to atleast improvemts suggest karlo.
megha_k Vanshikrishna typical_Indiangirl
Namaskar poetry guru(s) Aap hi bata do kaisi lagi ye poem..
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