I was driving along in my Entity XF when a bullet came and penetrated my windshield me not wanting to get into another gun fight stepped on the gas and made it out of the shootout without a scratch on him. I look down realizing that my first guess was wrong and I actually did get scratched from the window shards hitting my legs. It was nothing serious so I pulled one of my sleeves off of my body and bound the wound shut until I could get home and officially fix it. I was strolling on my way home expecting my girlfriend to be waiting by the front door to say hi and give me a kiss. I felt that there was something wrong though but I couldn't put my finger on it. I open the door to my house and I don't see my girlfriend there so I pulled out my pistol and started to search the house. I went down into the bedroom and I saw here sitting there with a scared look on her face. I mouthed the words to her ''Is there someone here.'' I have taught her how to read lips so she nodded and moved her head to the left. This meaning that someone was to the left of the door holding a gun up to her. I put the gun againest the wall and pulled the trigger. I heard something fall to the ground and I rushed in. I saw my girlfriend on the ground with a bullet in her stomach and I see Martin Madrazo a drug lord that I had been hunting down to get money back that he owed me. I put another bullet into his skull and ran to my girlfriend. I knew that there was nothing I could do so I just sat there holding her head trying to make the last moment I will ever have with her special. When she passed I took both of their bodies and burned them on the roof of my apartment building. I took out my pistol and shot bullets into the air to celebrate her death. I shot 30 bullets in the air for her age and then I heard someone coming up the staircase. I knew that I would be taken and I could only use a knife to defend myself for the fact that I just shot all of my bullets and wasn't going to be able to make it to a ammunation in time to get more. I did was any person would and I pulled on the parachute I left on the roof and jumped off. I left my car outside for a quick exit just in case got in and drove to the ammunation. I called up my friends and they said I could crash at their place. When I got to the ammunation I bought as much ammo as I could and also bought some very strong weapons including a lmg. I drove to my friends house and I went to sleep holding my ak47 that I just bought with my desert eagle to my left. I dreamt of my girlfriend that night. I woke up with my guns gone and a barrel of pistol to my head. I heard a deep raspy voice say " Were gonna have a little fun with you."
This is my new story and I would love to get some feedback on this I may give some dedications out if need be and also this is just the first chapter but the next few chapters are when things get intense and maybe a little dirty just depending on how I want this story to turn out. If you did not know this is talking about gta V but if you did know good job. I would love for you to get this story big for the first chapter so thank you and good bye my ldogians.