Man in black

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I got off the floor and on my feet instead. The book I got on the first day said you could make tools out of wood, stone etc. So, I went out to look for stone. I still wondered whether I should even stay in this city anymore but I thought of the matter at hand first. So I walked straight out of the city, the very large city and looked around. There were no trees around. So I had to wander around and look for a tree. Shocking I know. I did find some trees but they were quite a while away from that city. Did I even want to go back I asked myself, "Maybe, maybe" I said myself as I nearly walked into the trees. I managed to stop and took out that wooden axe which I got yesterday and hacked the tree apart. This was a very large and dark coloured tree. Lots and lots of wood. The were so many trees that like this one that they looked like they were connected by the branches. It was so dark in there that I almost didnt see a tall black figure, almost human like in the trees. Intrigued by this tall figure, I walked closer (real stupid move there) and it suddenly turned towards me. It had purple eyes and its long and lanky limbs were dark and it had strange purple particles floating around it. Its eyes were so calm but not for long. Its eyes turned from calm to rage in a moment it had a mouth so large that it looked like it could bite of my head. Probably because  it did want to do that. Its long and blocky arms swung at me and it screamed an ominous scream. It obviously wasn't friendly.
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