Beautiful Monster: Deleted Scenes

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Hi, there! These are just some scenes that I've deleted during my writing process. More may be added later as I continue writing the story, but I'd thought they may interest you readers.

And I would say the rating for these scenes are PG-13 to R, depending, but they are more advance. (Before I upload, I'll try to remember to put a rating on the top of the page.)

Now, I either deleted these scenes because:

- they made the rating go up, and I didn't like that

-they changed the character's personalities too soon (didn't like that either)

-it wasn't the "lead" that I was looking for (like I didn't want to head in that direction or it didn't fit in with the story at all)

-or I decided that it just wouldn't work. 

I hope you have a fun time reading this-if you want-and tell me what you think. Should I have kept them in the story? Or do you think I made the good choice by kicking them out?  :) 

Oh, and thanks to all my avid readers who really are reading Beautiful Monster-you are the reason why I continue on.

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