Deleted Scene #3

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 Okay, this one's small, but it has been deleted. This is from the chapter: Close Call (part 2). I would give this a G to PG rating; it's really limited in description. All I can say was that this is the spot where I developed my small, part-time writer's block. I couldn't decide where I wanted to go with this. All I knew was that, if I kept this in, it was going to complicate things more than I wanted it to. And that added more to my writer's block. This is when Jack is trying to say that Amy is "his", but she makes him shut up before he can finish the sentence. In the actual chapter, she just yells out his name to make him be quiet, in this one....well...you'll see...

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"Not until you tell me who the hell he is!" Jack points at Erik. "And until you say 'your mi-'"

I know what he's going to say at the end of that sentence, and I panic. So I....I kiss him....

I should've just slapped him. 

I push him back.

 Oh, my God-what have I done? 

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I'm so glad I thought of something else. I mean, poor Erik! Well, comment if you want to...or if you can... This scene is so small, it's hard to find something to say about it. LOL. 

Thanks, readers!

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