okay so i didn't pick this up last night when i was re reading chapter 6 & 7 but in 6, emily is talking in present tense but its supposed to be past. i guess wattpad didnt save it when i changed it to past but im just going to clear everything up:
emily is supposed to be telling the story of how she's taking her and harrys breakup. the first month was when she went to parties, got drunk and high and everything else. this was when she was too ashamed to contact rayne, gemma, eleanor and the boys.
the second month was when she realized drugs, alcohol, and sex just wasnt worth getting out of bed for so she let those things go. she started talking to everyone again and her and louis got really close. her and brandon are still friends with benefits though. she gets a job at forever 21 and starts classes again in august.
the third month is just where it changes to present tense. she's having classes, a job, and still dealing with missing harry.
chapter 8 is going to be harrys pov and explain how he has been taking the breakup and just his interactions with the boys on the bus.
hope that helps. it was like midnight last night by the time i finished re writing so i was too tired to pick up any mistakes. sorry!
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Last First Kiss 3 (HS)
Fanfiction****THIS IS THE THIRD BOOK OF LAST FIRST KISS**** Will Emily and Harry be able to fix the damage that has been done?
