my life(avneil ff)

chapter 3. feelings...

Avni walked to her cabin in a trance.she sat in her chair with a thud thinking wat has happened just before.she was feeling his body against her now also n she blushed bcz of tht.his words echoed in her mind 'wish to c u soon' avni in her mind y does he want to meet me again???she was lost in hir thoughts...

Neil while driving his car also thinking about avni..
Neil:avni I missing u so badly I just wanna be with u wanna spend tym with u.god wat happened to me.u was with her till nw then y am I missing her this fast???
Soon he reached his office n attended his meetings.

It was 10:30 at night n avni was still in hospital cabin gng through some random reports of some patients.suddenly her phone beeped distracting her concentration.
Seeing the msg she was shocked to d core.she never expected dis msg.a small smile was seen on her face after few seconds..

She immediately called d person who msgd her to come n meet her in d hospital.

Neil reached home 11 at night and straightly went to his room.he quickly got freshen up n sat on bed.immediately his thoughts were occupied by his new frnd,his new love to be precised....
He remembered all d things frm strtng.seeing her for d frst tym,their eyelocks,exchanging, numbers n finally his hug!!!
He smiled remembering that n his hands reached his mobile.nt able to control his eagerness he thought to msg her through WA..to his bad luck her last seen was yesterday 9 20 am!!
But also he msgd her hi with a hope.n again lost in his thoughts of avniiiii.... Swetha came to his room to check on him n was shocked to c her son thinking smthng n smiling.she slowly went towards him tapped him on his shoulder.
Neil turned back n was shocked to c her in his room.he stood in his place with a jump n rubbed his eyes to make his vision clear..nxt word escaped his mouth shocked swetha.
Neil:avni.........😳😳😳
Swetha:ha?avni....?tillu who is she??...
Neil:avni?u r askng who is she??he can u frget ur own name??
S:wats?frgetting my owns names??offooo tillu wats happened to u?han?me myself swetha here!!who is dis avni???tillu!!!saying that she hit him on his head🤕😇
Neil came to reality n saw that d person in front of him is nt avni but his own mother.....
N:mom wat r u dng here?wen did u come?y did u come nw at dis tym?
S:oh my gods tillu!!nw shd I takes permissions to come to ur rooms han?and ha I came here wen u r in ur dreamland chanting only one names avni avni!!by d way who is she??tell tell?
N:mom I didn't mean that u can come to my room anytym without my permission but I mean do u have any work with me?so u come here now?
Neil said dis all to avoid avni's topic but swetha is swetha so she didn't care abt all these n askd him abt avni.
N:mom ntng lyk tht I was jus....he don't know what to say n swetha interrupted him n say
S: tell na tillu.wait wait is she ur lover????swetha asked with a 1000 volt smile on her face.
Neil unknowingly smiled at the thought of avni being his lover...n dis was noticed by swetha...
S:o my gods tillu u r in love!!!wows wows!!so tells me tillu did u propose her?he does she looks? where will she stay?wen dids u meet her?he did u meet her?does she love u back?common tillu tells na...swetha said all dis one go.
N:mom mom mom calm down.there is ntng lyk u r thinking.i met her tday only n v r just frnds
But sme where in his heart he also knows that he lied n they r nt juz frnds but more than that
S: acha!u say that u bth r frnds n u don't lv her??but ur eyes n d smile on ur lips says that u lv her tillu.u can fool anyone in dis world but nt me bcz I'm ur mom tillu.so accept it.u lvs her rights??
N: smiles n says I don't know wat is dis feeling mom but from d minute I saw her I was stucked in my mind.i am nt able to concentrate on anything..I jus want her by my side always..I felt lyk iam d happiest m luckiest person in dis world wen i was with her!!I frgot Everything in tht hour wen I was with her.
S:(after listening to him carefully)dis is love tillu.
Neil was shocked with his mom's statement.
Neil:mom?
S:yes tillu.i know u r confused with ur feelings.but the name of dis feeling is love.dnt worries take tym n think.u ll realize it soon.good nyt beta...
N:with a smile good night Mom.
S:gd nyt don't think too much abt my bahu n sleep nw it's already late v will talk tomorrow clearly abt my bahu.
N:mom......
S: ok ok I'm gng
With that swetha left d room.neil smiled to himself n thought am I really in lv?do I lv avni?...with that he lied on bed but couldn't sleep.he was Waiting fr avni's reply...just then his phone buzzed n saw a notification...it was from her..a msg a reply to be precised fr her...his heart danced in excitement n he thanked his stars..with a wide smile he opened his WA n her contact.....

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