Title: Reflection
Author: wolfxrain
genre: Sci-fi, Fantasy
Summary: Creatures called Avros lurk in darkness and the purpose of a Sairen Wolf is to stop them. Lorraine is among many born to fight them, but she is different from her own kind. Something subsides deep in her heart, something she was born with. As a white wolf courage runs through her veins, but will she find the strength to rise up to her name? Though it is a war she faces, it is the least of their concern to save the human kind. There is more behind the curtain and its only the beginning of a new discovery
9/10 I love the summary! It easily had me at the first sentence! Very intriuging and can attract a lot of attention!
Number of Chapters (that were reviewed): 5 chapters
Rate: 9/10 This plot is very creative! I've never heard of an Avro, but I already love them even though they're apparently "evil"!
Grammar/Pacing: Your grammar is perfection! I didn't spot any errors! Nothing! Nada! Although the pacing is just a little too fast on some parts, but those can be easily fixed by adding more details. For example: Her reunion with her brother came out of no where, and I was wondering if I skipped a chapter or something. But other than that, your pacing is, also, perfection!
Some Improvements: There are a couple of capitalization errors, but that's it. They were very minor errors that can be easily passed as nothing, so no worries.
Cover: 7/10 Your cover definitely shows how it relates to your story, but it's not really the type of cover that yells "HEY! YEAH I'M TALKING TO YOU! YEAH YOU! READ ME! JUDGE ME BY MY COVER, NOT MY WORDS!"
My Favorite Characters: EVAN! Oh my gosh, Evan is so mysterious and intriguing! I really hope he isn't a bad guy! I totally ship him and Lorraine if they have a chance. I'll call them Evaine!
Lorraine is a beauty! I love that she's a rare werewolf, and the fact that her brother and father were kidnapped has made her turn into a tough nugget. I don't know why Old Brian said that she was missing courage because she was courageous from the moment I read about her!
Additional Notes: I truly do love this story! It's plot is amazing! And right after I finish this review, I;m going to read the next chapter! Your book deserves more reads because you're an awesome writer who is writing an awesome book:) Please keep updating! I'll be reading! xoxo
