Title: Stars Can't Shine Without Darkness
Author: paige_pomer
Genre: Teen Fiction
Summary: Lena feels like she doesn't really have a place in the world until she starts texting a teenage boy that she doesn't know. She thinks it's harmless, until an alarming event occurs that changes her life forever.
8/10 The summary is great and it can attract attention, but I think that if you add a quote from the book then it will be even more intriguing!
Number of Chapters (that were reviewed): 14 chapters
Rate: 7.5/10 I really like where this story is going, and it definitely has a lot of potential to be a 'wattpad prize' type of book. I think that adding more details about what the characters and the scenery will help add meat to your story.
Grammar/Pacing: I didn't find one speck of grammar error, it was flawless! Although the pacing is a bit fast, but I think adding in more details will help. For example: When Lena is texting Noah or Kyle, you should describe how she feels or what face expression she is making.
Cover: 9/10 I love how the words are very bold and can easily attract attention. I, also, love the background, it's pretty and it relates to your title
Some Improvements: I think just adding details to the characters and scenery will make your story perfect! Describe Lena's five senses: what does she hear, feel, sees, smell, taste?
My Favorite Characters: Noah! Ahh, Noah! *happy sigh* I really can't wait to read the chapter when him and her meet! They better meet because I totally ship them!... But then there is also Kyle and I even though I hated him at first, I fell in love with him after reading is POV.
I'm really sorry, but I dislike Britney! She is SO mean! and Lena can do way better than her! She definitely wasn't a good friend, so I don't know what Lena was talking about! Britney is a great character addition, nevertheless, she is an obstacle for the main character to overcome.
Additional Notes: Please update soon! You left me haning on the cliffhanger! Your book has so much potential so don't give up! xoxo
