I Wish (Roc Royal Story)

Not a Chapter

Okay so I just have to point out a few things that I hate about some people stories/ one shots.

-I don't like when its the introduction of the book and people put stuff like "Wassup my name Keyana. I'm 5'2, red bone, Long hair dont care and I got a perfect body. My best friends are wattpadaneisha and Tyler. And I'm the baddest bitch in my city."

There are so many things wrong with this:

1. Why does the ideal perfect character always have to be a "red bone" and short with long and super ghetto ass friends.

2. Its a book not a reality show. We need YOU THE AUTHOR to introduce the character not her introducing her self and hella ratchet at that.

3. How come you can't just let all that flow in the story like instead of saying that maybe one day a guy sees her and thinks she the most beautiful thing in the world and its goes like "I loved the way her beautiful brown eyes shined in the moon and for once! her CHOCOLATE skin sprakled." Shit something like that! I feel books are meant to make u think or imagine. When u describe a beautiful scenery we wanna be able to imagine that beautiful scenery. Describing your characters like that is a no no. If u describe the person the way I said then it will more interesting and I could just imagine it in my own way. I can make her as tall as I want to. I can make her hair as long I want to. Sometimes I even wanna imagine myself.

4. Why does the main character that's a female always have to be "perfect" put some damn flaws in there! it makes the love seem even more real to me.

Also stories are getting kinda cliché. Why do I always see the nerd falls in love with her bully and he falls back in love with her. And when in the hell did it make complete sense to fall in love with a creepy ass mutherfucker that kidnapped u?

And stop with the ratchet typing. Like we don't wanna see "Man nigxa quit playin. *pops gum* Call him zaddy and this that and the third. It ruins the book or imagine COMPLETELY. Like if u took out the chewing gum and horrible grammar and spelling it actually could've been something good.

And if you're gonna make a freaky one shot or imagine whatever u wanna call it then don't make it short and boring if u know you're not good at it then DONT DO IT. Make it longer and put more detail into it that's what makes it get even slightly close to being a pretty big hit.

Also make sure to plan your story out so at certain points u can catch us off guard. Then that will make people want to keep reading or at least me. I like surprises especially if I don't know I'm about to be surprised.

Its just me going on a rant about stuff I don't like. Take my advice or leave it. I'm just tryna help but if anybody knows any GOOD imagine books that DONT include any of that stuff above then drop the names below or if u have a book u would like me to read or personal book advice etc. Deuces! ✌