The Secrets

Still no answer

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My body froze,  the creaks were coming closer.  Dexter stood  beside me,  i look at him.  " why... how did you know about this? " he frowns while glancing out the window. " i-i over heard my dad. " Sighing a take a fighting stance, my body starting to glow. the feeling of my bodies power calmed me. though my heart still raced. I hear a board crack, i light my hands stand waiting for whoever,  or whatever is there.  the nob turns ,then.... silence.  i look at Dexter he shrugs his shoulders. I freeze when the door burts open, there, stood one of those dark things from earlier,  i smirk.  this won't hard at all. I run towards but before i could strike Dexter grabs me by the collar and pulls me back. " what are you?  stupid?  that's the captain, you can't kill him,  well easily.  He survived the plague. He's lived for centuries. " i snort,  rewarding me with a hit to the back of the head. " HEY WHAT THE HELL?" pouting i turn to look at the creature in the doorway.  " why is it here?"

I already knew the answer but,   I still wanted to hear it.  " To kill you,  Zack. " i look at him,  " can... you help me? " he looks shocked,  and nods.  he grabs his staff from his back,  a blue black flame appeared around his head. 

"By the power of the reaper, i realise the.  to claw the helpless and innocent, to make them beg and bleed. Ediery i call apon the to give me strength. Blue blood fall. "

His staff changed into a sword, that looked like blue blood was dripping from the blade. Its handel had a skull engraved in the side, which glowed a faint blue.  His eyes were pure blue, a shiver went down my spine. shesh, that's... scary.  He grins " it's supposed to be Zack. " i frown, great he can read minds too. he smirks and sprints towards the creater. It looks up at Dexter,  Raising its sword it shrieks and tries to defend,  but fails  and ends up fading on the wood floor.  i laugh, " that was AWESOME" he laughs in return. " Uh..thanks" he says sheepishly.

"what the hell happened,  and whos that? " says Takeshi as he runs out of his room shirtless.  I frown,  trying not to laugh, " this is Dexter,  he's the son of the reaper" Takeshi shakes his hand. " nice to meet you" His eyes never leaving Dexter he asks "so can anyone of you explain what happened?" Me and Dexter look at each other, "well...' i say' uh...." dexter says the same time i do." He sent a Dark creature to kill him, isn't that obvious?" Say's a female voice from behind takeshi. Monico was wearing a tank top and short shorts, she was barefooted and her hair had a head band in it. Dexter laughs, and whispers to me," Close your mouth before the flies make a nest in it." i shake my head and shut my mouth. " Hi Dexer, nice to see you again." He grins at Monico, "Nice to see you too" he pulls her in for a hug, she pushs him back, " I SAID DONT HUG ME" He laughs, "well sorry" all that came to mind was "Ho-ho-how do you know each other?" She walks up to me, with her arms crossed infront of her chest "this Guff, saved my life, he's been protecting me since the day of the car crash. So you could say he's like an older brother." I nod, I smirk at the pouty look on his face, its kinda obvious he likes her more then a sister, but still, he dosen't seem like her type. He glared at me, i forgot he could read minds, so so sorry man. His glare softend alittle. wow, your not cold like your father are you. he shakes his head. " are you two having a conversation?" says monico beside me, her voice sounded annoyed. I look away whisteling, making Dexter fall to the ground laughing. i smirk, great day huh? I frown, still, i have no answers, and who exactually is my dad? And...........Will i every go back the world i grew up in?

Dexters P.O.V

I look at Zack sadly. He may never get his answers, becaue his father, can't answer them just yet. He will answer his questions once he choses his path. Zack was looking at the ground, his mind was racing with thoughts that made my heart hurt, he's, really sad. He just discovered his life was a lie. that his mother wasn't his mother. and that his father was alive. I saw a vision of the last time he saw his father, HE saw HIS FATHER, die.... but how? It was a fake death. Know i understand why he wants answers. Monico stopped talking and looked at Zack sadly, i frown and walk over to her. "JUst leave him be, he's lost in thought about all the questions that need answers.' i look at her, i have to tell her.' he, watched his father die, Monico." Her eyes widen as she glanced up at me then back at Zack." But, how?" "thats the question that i've been asking."