@unicorngiraffe_ wrote a very entertaining story all together. You can picture the sences in your head pretty clearly and I was never lost while reading it. My favorite thing about it is the way she words it. Her sentences are appealing, funny, and straight to the point.
The only bad thing was sometimes the characters would do things and you wouldn't know why or how they felt.
Example 1:
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Why dis she calm down? What was she thinking? I know if you keep reading on it kinda explains it, but still way would she calm down if she is being attacked by a weird guy?
Example 2:
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Again, what was she feeling and why? Why did she do what she did?
Final Thoughts-
This book has a interesting plot and dialogue is entertaining. I really recommened it.