I don't really understand these wolf books so if these questions are answered in the book or common knowlege I'm sorry.
In the beginning you say their wolves but then you words like hands. I can't tell if their wolves or humans.
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The other thing was you should probably start to space out some of the paraghraphs because readers dont want to read an esseay all in one bite. The chapters are really long too, but that's just my opinion.
Over all it was an entertaining chapter but it wasn't my cup of tea. The only thing I have to say is space chapters out!
