By: @dogloverishere
I read the beginning of the first chapter and skimmed the rest of it. I have to say the beginning isn't the most interesting thing. The first paragraph is fine but stuff after that seem like it should be farther in the story. The only reason for that is you want to get your reader interested in the beginning than give them whatever the hell you want.
Overall-
I think the beginning needs work but that's about it. She didn't give too much detail or too little and grammar seemed good.
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Book Review ON HOLD
RandomI will review books! I would LOVE to read new author's books who want to get their name out there. Plz read rules before putting your book in.
