Karan's Concern

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Recap : Karan was trying to find preeta everywhere. He saw a doctor. The doctor told him about preeta's condition and the place where she was being kept. He took preeta and went to a small house in the jungle. The old couple treated preeta.

Karan went in the room where preeta was lying down. He saw her and was smiling. Preeta did not see him as her eyes were closed but she was continously calling karan.

Karan : baby doll mein yaha hu
(preeta saw him and smiled)
Preeta :Karan tum theek ho na..? Tumhe kuch hoya to nhi na..? Batao na. Aise chup chap Kyo khade ho

(karan was amazed listening that in this condition also she was asking about him)

Karan : baby doll mein bilkul theek hu. Dekho tumhare saamne khada hu.. Tum theek ho na.....? Tumhe pain to nhi ho rha..?

Preeta tries to get up but she was feeling pain in her stomach.
Karan went there and looked at her angrily

Karan : kya zaroorat thi Tumhe wo chaaku se mujhe bachane ki..? Dekho ab Tumhe kitna Dard ho rha hai. Wo bhi sirf meri wajah se... And what is the need to get up..?

Preeta : agar Tumhe nhi bachati Toh wo Tumhe chaaku Mar deta. Aur wo mein dekh nhi sakti thi. (karan was feeling helpless and caressed her hair. He felt that he has got such a good friend who can risk her life for him)
She was again trying to get up as she wanted to drink water
Karan :ab Kyo uth rhi ho?
Preetawo mujhe Paani peena hai..
Karan : to tum mujhe nhi bata sakti....?
He want to take Water for her. He returned with a glass in his hand. He handed over it to her.
Preeta : thank you karan 😊. And drinks the water
Karan smiles seeing her
At the same time the old woman enters and saw them

Old woman : bethi, Tumhe pata hai tumhara pati Tumhe lekar kitna darra hua tha..(preeta saw the old women and was shocked. Then she looked at karan angrily) Wo Tumhe apni baahon mein itni door se yaha tak le kar aaya hai. Aur bahot pareshaan bhi tha..

Preeta when heard that he carried her in his arms and was worried for her, she smiled looking at him. And thought to not reveal the truth as she trusts karan. Karan was looking at her and thought that she may reveal the truth.

Preeta : aunty ji inhone mera itna khayal rakha?

Karan was shocked that she did not reveal the truth and accepted him as her husband

Old woman : ha beta. Tumhare pati ne hee tumhari haan bachayi hai

Preeta smiled hearing this and thanked karan for saving her life.

That old woman left. Now karan and preeta were alone.

Karan :tumne unhe Sach nhi bataya.......? (surprised)
Preeta : Karan mein jaanti hu ki tum kuch bhi bina wajah ke nhi kahoge... Aur mujhe tum par pura trust hai. Aur mujhe tum par pura bharosa tha ki tum mujhe kuch nhi hone doge

(karan who heard her saying "mujhe tum par pura trust hai" became emotional. He smiled at her)

Karan : itna bharosa hai tumhe mujh par.......? (huskily)

Preeta : khud se bhi zyaada 😊

The old woman came and handed over a soup bowl to karan and asked him to feed her. Karan took the bowl from her and started feeding preeta lovingly. Both had a cute eye lock

(O ho…

Bheegi bheegi sadkon pe main
Tera intezaar karun
Dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
Tere hi naam karun

Khudko main yoon kho doon
Ke phir na kabhi paaun
Haule haule zindagi ko
Ab tere hawaale karun

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Karam re, karam re
Tera mujhpe karam hua re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho…

Tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
To toote saare bharam re

Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re
Sanam re, sanam re
Tu mera sanam hua re

O ho…)

The old couple entered again. Karan and preeta broke their eye lock.

The old couple said that they will arrange some transport for them and they can leave by tomorrow morning.
Both of them were happy.

Karan and preeta : thank you so much uncle and aunty ji. Aap dono ne hamari bahot help kari hai. Hum aapka Ye ehsaan kabhi nhi bhula payenge

The old couple smiled and left from there

Karan : tum upar bed pe so jao mein neeche zameen pe so jaunga took his pillow down

Preeta : nhi karan tum zameen par nhi soyoge.

Karan : preeta tum tension mat lo mein adjust kar Lunga. Aur waise bhi sirf Ek hee din ki Toh baat hai na....

Preeta took some pillows and divided the bed in 2 parts

Preeta : tum bed ke is side so jao aur mein dusri side.. Meine tumhe kaha tha na ki mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai......

Karan : but preeta...
Preeta interrupted and said : theek hai Phir mein bhi neeche hee soungi
Karan : Acha Acha theek hai meri maa. Mein is side so jaata hu aur tum dusri side... Fine now?
Preeta smiled
Then both of them quickly dozed off because of the tiring day...

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Precap : Karan and preeta left from the house in a bus... But suddenly................

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