A/N: Hello guys, I just received a review from someone (In my fanfiction site)!
the death bringer779: Sup yea I think ur missing a chapter.
M: I don't know what you mean by missing a chapter, but if you meant that in my chapter, there are some chapters from the manga that I missed, that I know. I purposely did that so the pacing isn't too slow. And I don't know if the majority likes to read short chapters or long. Can everybody help me? So I can improve the story, thanks!
Also, I made a story, it's "Dying 死んでいる", I don't wanna spoil anything so you guys can check it out!
Disclaimer: Eiichiro Oda owns One Piece.
Last time on Chapter 20...
"Errand-boy! TAKE THAT FOOD THIS INSTANT! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT KIND OF MAN HE IS!?" Patty shouts while Luffy sighs loudly again, he didn't like someone shouting at him today.
"We're cooks, and it's a cook's duty to help the people who're starving, either with no money or not." Luffy says, then suddenly, Don Krieg choked Luffy.
"ERRAND-BOY!"
"LUFFY!"The cooks and Luffy's Nakama shouted in surprise and fear as they thought Luffy would be done ( except Zoro ).
Keyword: Attempted
Don Krieg thought Luffy would be gone, but Luffy didn't have an ounce of blood coming out of him, or even a pain in his face. But Don Krieg didn't think about that and made a smug face. "Nice restaurant you've got here." Don Krieg pauses "I'll take it."
'I can act like Sanji, yeah, I'll just act like Sanji at this time. Then I can beat Krieg, yeah that's a good plan!' Luffy thought as he tried calming himself down since he was cranky and all...
After that, Don Krieg let Luffy go, the others were already fleeing. "I TOLD YOU SO! THIS IS THE REAL KRIEG! AND NOW HE'S GONNA TAKE OVER OUR SHIP!" A cook shouts as the customers were creating a stampede, Patty slowly opens his eyes.
"Ugh... What's with all the noise...?" Patty says as he tries to remember what happened. Gin was devastated by Don Krieg's action.
"Don Krieg... What about your promise..." Gin says as he was on the floor, Luffy looks at Gin.
"Hey Gin! Are you alright!?" Luffy shouts worriedly as he watches Gin, maybe repenting on bringing Don Krieg, but he wasn't sure.
After Patty remembers what happened, he was looking at Don Krieg in surprise as he screamed. "My ship's all worn out, So I've been wanting one. Once my business is done with you, I'll have you get off this ship..." Don Krieg pauses "Right now, I have around a hundred subordinates on my ship, and they're all starving and critically wounded. So prepare enough water and food, to feed all 100 men of mine." Don Krieg pauses again "There are already a few who've already starved to death, so make it quick...!"
"You're asking us to willingly feed a hundred of pirates, knowing that they"ll attack us and steal our ship later!?" A cook shouts in disbelief as he pauses "WE REFUSE!"
"Refuse...? Seems like we have a little misunderstanding in our hands. I wasn't asking whether or not you'd do it..." Don Krieg pauses "I'M ORDERING YOU. AND NOBODY DISOBEYS MY ORDERS!"
All of the cooks flinched "Sanji... Luffy... I'm sorry... I... Never intended for things to turn out this way..." Gin says as he was still on the ground.
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