Thank you all for showering so much love. I become completely overwhelmed with your replies. So as the target is achieved . So I going to write the next episode ...
Don't worry guys it will be an avneil ff only but for sometime bear avni and ali together...
Episode starts......
Basically avni is very modern girl. She loves to wear modern dresses.
Today ali throws a party and invited all his friends.
Ali came to pick up avni...
Avni: jaana I don't know what should I wear today?
Ali: see I bought a dress for you . Please wear it.
Avni: thank you for the dress jaana
She takes the dress and go inside the bathroom to change
After sometime she came , she was looking breathtaking in the dress. But she was not feeling comfortable in that dress because the dress was showing much of her cleavage and its length is also very small.
Avni: jaana this dress is very small na
Ali: no baby it's nothing like that. You are looking beautiful in this.
And they go towards the party venue..
After sometime, all their friends came
Riya: wooww avuu you are looking so hot
Akash: yes avu you are looking beautiful
Avni: thanks guys. Actually jaana brought this one for me
But all her friends didn't notice that she was not feeling comfortable in it. After that Neil came, his eyes were only searching for his lady love. Finally his eyes found , he goes towards her
Avni : hi Neil , nice to meet you
Neil: hi avu. He saw her dress and doesn't like to see her in that dress.
Avni: I think you should also make gf for you. See na you are so hot, handsome every girl will drool over you.
Neil: don't you wanna become my gf?
Avni: actually Neil..
Neil: it's ok avu I am joking
Ali does announcement,
So ladies and gentlemen, you all must be thinking why I arranged this party. so the wait is over. I arranged this party for my love . I am gonna propose her. Everyone starts hooting.
Here avni totally become nervous. And in nervousness she holds neil hand. Neil he will porpose me today. I am so happy...
But neil was in very bad state.
Ali: lights off please... So avni my life . please come he extended his hand towards her and she totally become red due to blushing.
Ali: from 15 yrs we are together. I always want to tell you about my feelings but somewhere I was afraid to tell you.
Ali: mujhe gol gol baate karni nhi aati. He goes on his knees and take out ring from his pocket.
Will you spend rest of your life with me?
Avni : yes jaana I will love to do so. Don't know why but her eyes were searching for neil.
He slides the ring. Hugs her tightly.
Here neil was very depressed and on the verge of crying. He came out of the venue.
Avni came beside him.
Avni: why you come outside neil?
Neil: actually I was not feeling well
Avni: main jaana ko bulau
Neil: no avu. I am feeling well now. Congratulations by the way. Finally you got your love.
Avni: aise congrats karega. Ek hug toh banta hai. And avni for the first time hugs him very tightly and hold him very close to her and neil also forget about everything and kisses her hair.
This all were seen by a pair of eyes he is not liking all this to see his gf in someone's else arm yes the guy is on other than ali
Ali: neil bass baby ko hi congrats karega
Neil: aisa nhi hai bro and hugs him also
Ali: baby andar chalo ek dance toh banata hai
They go inside the venue
Song starts playing in background, ADHM
He starts to dance with avni very closely but avni is not at all comfortable due to her dress. Neil was continuously observing avni moves and found that she is not comfortable and soon the dance ends.
Ali : (moving close to his ear) may I kiss you baby?
Avni: no please I am not comfortable. All are seeing us please jaana .
She goes towards the corner and neil came behind her found that she is adjusting her dress
Neil: why you wear this dress if you are not feeling comfortable in this
Avni: jaana brought this one for me . I told him I am not feeling comfortable but he insist me to wear it
Neil: how he can force you. Let me talk to him
Avni: (holds his hand) no neil he will become upset
Neil: but I can't see you getting uncomfortable
Avni: you are very nice neil. I am very lucky to have a frnd like you and she kisses his cheek.
Neil: it's nothing like that whenever you need me I will always there for you.
Party ends and everyone goes congratulating them
Manager: ali sir we want you to complete all the formalities
Ali: I will do it later. I have to drop my gf to her hostel.
Avni: no jaana you do your work. I will go with neil.
Neil: yes I will drop her.
Ali: ok. Take care of yourself bye baby
And they go...
Inside the car...
Avni: neil whom you love will be the luckiest girl
Neil: hmm.. I don't think I will get that girl
Avni: what??
Neil: see your hostel came.
Avni: bye neil. See you tomorrow in college
Neil: bye avu...
After that he again goes towards that house and call one girl Inside the room and fucked her thinking about avni and ali's moments.
After that he also goes towards his hostel...So hope you like the episode...
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