Avneil: The erotic version..💕💕

Caring Neil

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Episode starts...
Neil opens the bathroom door and is shocked to se avni state...
She is completely drenched in water, crying continuously , and all her hairs are totally become messed up.
Neil: av...avniiii... And moves towards and off the shower and hugs her tightly.
Neil: please avni Sambhalo Khud Ko Tum Aise Tut nahi sakti. You know na I cannot see you in this state.
Avni: neil he broke me. I love him so much and he is questioning my character.
Neil: avu don't talk like this see you are totally wet. First change yourself.
Avni: no neil I just wanna die. I don't want to live anymore and starts crying bitterly
Neil: shut up don't say all this rubbish. Wait I will bring your clothes
Neil brings her clothes and give it to her but she was standing just like a statue. She is not doing any movement
Neil: avu change your dress otherwise you will become sick.
Avni: I don't have this much strength neil please.
Neil: (in mind) I cannot see you like this avni. I promise I will make you happy again. Inside he is also crying but for avni he has to be strong.
Neil: okay let me change your dress and he closes his eyes and makes her wear her dress perfectly.
Neil: come I will dry your hair and he makes her sit on the chair and dry her
Hair.
Avni: neil I am sorry only because of me you have to bear all this.
Neil: pagal hai kya tu. I am your friend right?
Avni: no. Best friend
Neil: then stop bashing yourself and wait I will bring some food for you and he was about to go but avni holds his hand .
Avni: please don't leave me alone.
Neil: I will never live you but the food is downstairs so only 2 min I will bring it.
Avni: okay neil.
And neil goes in kitchen and he is not able to control anymore and bursts into tears.
Neil: why god? Why you hurt her? You know na I cannot see her in this state. I love her. I will prefer to die rather than seeing her in this state. No neil you cannot fall weak. You have to compose her. You have to be her strength and clears his tears and come to his room while taking food.
Neil: today I will make you eat
Avni: I don't want to eat anything neil.
Neil: okay I am also not gonna eat
Avni: no wait I will eat but thoda sa
Neil: okay and makes her eat with his hand. Now avni you sleep I will be back in sometime
Avni: please stay with me.
Neil: okay
Neil makes her lie her head on his lap and makes her sleep and soon avni sleeps.
Neil: (in mind) avni I cannot see you in this state. Please don't torture yourself. I will never leave you alone and soon neil also sleeps while thinking all this .
In morning...
Neil wakes up and find avni is not there he become tensed and start finding her.
Neil: avni where are you he starts shouting but he is not able to find her. Tears starts making it's way from his eyes.
Just then avni came...
Avni: neil..
Neil immediately hugs her very tightly.
Neil: where were you i was searching for you? Please don't leave me alone avni. I cannot live without you. He did not realize what he said and says means you are my best friend yrr.
Avni: neil I am fine see and I had gone to temple for praying god to show me the right path of my life.
Neil: but why you leave alone. You could have atleast told me. Please from next time you will tell me. I will also come with you.
Avni: ok neil. But I want to talk something from you.
Neil: yes avni say na.
Avni: neil actually I don't know I am right or not but I want you to move on. Only because of me you are unable to move on in your life. I will soon go from your life then you can enjoy your life freely.
Neil: if I say something then will you listen to me?
Avni: yes off course neil.
Neil: would you like to give a chance to our marrige?
Avni: neil i don't want to become burden on you. I know you are doing all this for me. Buy don't worry about me I will manage something.
Neil: but avni I want to work on this marrige. I want to give a chance to it. I am not doing anything for you but for us.
Avni: but I am not sure Neil that whether I will be able to love you or not?
Neil: take your time and if you will not ne able to love me then we will be friends for life. I will be happy to have a good friend like you for all my life.
Avni: neil you are very good. You deserve someone better than me.
Neil: hey you are insulting u friend. I don't want anyone to insult my frnd.
Avni: ok neil. I will try.
Neil: so let's starts with new journey of avneil.
Avni: avneil?
Neil: yes avni. Avni+Neil=Avneil.
Avni: (smiles) yes avneil.
Neil: thanks for giving a chance to this marrige. I will never let you down avni.
Avni: I know neil you will never let me down and hugs him.
Neil: now I think I should go and freshen up.
Avni: okay you go I will make breakfast for both of us.
Neil: okay wifey.(and winks)
Avni: go hubby.(and smiles) he is so cute.
In kitchen
Avni: (in mind) thank you God for showing me the right path of my life. I know Neil will always keep me happy. He is one of my best friend and I promise neil I will make this marrige work.
After sometime...
Neil comes downstairs and finds that breakfast table is ready and avni is waiting for him.
Neil come and sit beside her .
Neil: let start.
Avni: starts eating her breakfast while neil enjoyed her cuteness.
Avni: why are you seeing me you also eat. It's very tasty.
Neil: it has to be tasty as it was made by my wifey.
And they enjoys there breakfast and neil and avni together go to office.

Episode ends...
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