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Episode starts...
In the morning...
Avni wakes up and finds that Neil is not at couch. She thinks he must be in bathroom so she goes and checks but he is not there.
Avni: neil where are you? I know you are sad but atleast come to me na. Neil
Please where are you?
She comes downstairs but didn't find Neil and goes towards kitchen and found a note their.
Note-
Neil: I am going to office as you want this only. So have a great day. Have your breakfast and I will come late in night. So don't wait for me.
And a lone tear falls from avni eyes.
Avni: why neil? Why are you doing this? I know you care for me then why don't you talk to me? Don't you wanna see my face?
And she clears her tears and start doing household works.
Just then bell rings.. avni goes and open the door and found ali standing there.
Ali: hii avni
Avni:hii.
Ali: what happen avni? Why are you looking tensed? All okay
Avni: no ali actually there is a misunderstanding between me and neil. I am trying to solve it but it is increased.
Ali: wait let me talk to neil. I will make him understand.
Avni: no ali please. I will do it.
Ali: ok avni but tell me if you need my help.
Avni: ok ali.
Ali: will you not call me inside?
Avni: I am sorry ali. Come sit. I will bring something for you.
Ali: why are you being so formal. Sit na.
Avni: wait just 2 min I will bring something for you.
Ali: okay.
And avni goes to kitchen suddenly she starts to feel weakness. Her visions gets blur. She faints and her head strikes with slab and it starts bleeding.
Ali: avni come fast yrr
Avni:(no response)
Ali: avni are you listening. Okay let me come.
He comes to kitchen and totally become shocked to see avni in this state.
Ali: avni get up. What happened?
He sprinkle water on her face but she didn't get up.
Ali: let me call doctor.
Ali: dr. It's very urgent can you please come.
Dr: I am coming don't worry.
Ali: OK dr.
Ali: I think I should call neil.
Ali calls neil but he is not answering his call. Then suddenly neil sees 20 missed calls of ali.
Neil: why ali is calling me? I think I should call him. Neil calls ali.
Neil: hello ali.
Ali: where were you neil? I called you so many times but you didn't receive my call.
Neil: what happen ali why are you sounding tensed? All okay
Ali: no Neil nothing is okay.
Neil: what happen?
Ali: neil actually avni just now fainted and he tells him everything.
Neil: ali please you be there. I will be there in 10 mins. Please stay with her.
Ali: yes neil come fast.
Neil moves as fast as possible and starts his car.
In the car..
Neil: how can I be so careless? He was calling me and i ... Damm it. I hope avni you are fine. I am sorry only because of me all this happened na. Please forgive me. I am coming avni just be strong. He is on the verge of crying.
He reaches his home and found ali standing outside his room door.
Neil: ali where is avni? Please tell me. I wanna see her.
Ali: neil relax. Dr is checking her. Please have patience.
Neil: okay and tears start flowing from his eyes.
Just then dr come outside.
Neil: dr. How is she? Why she fainted? Please tell me dr. I wanna meet her.
Dr: who are you?
Neil: I am her husband.
Dr: okay you go meet her then I wanna talk to you.
Neil: thank you so much dr.
He goes inside and shocked to see his lady love. she is lying unconscious on bed and her head is dressing. He runs to her.
Neil: avni get up. See I came. Talk to me na. Why are you silent? You don't look good like this. So wake up.
Dr: mr. Neil she need half an hour to wake up. She is under medicine effect.
Come I wanna talk to you.
Neil: okay dr. Thank you so much for all this.
Dr: it's okay mr neil. It's my work.
Neil: yes dr. What you wanna talk?
Dr: neil you are her husband and you don't know she had not eaten anything since two days. That's why her body is now very weak. I want you take care of her. She needs you. When I was checking her she was continuously reciting your name. Please take care of her and please brought this medicines giving him the slip.
Neil: okay dr. I will take care of everything. It's my responsibility now.
Dr: okay. Please say thanks to mr. Ali. He only called me on right time. Otherwise it can be risky for her.
Neil: okay dr. Let me drop you outside.
Dr: okay bye. Please take care of her.
Neil goes to ali
Neil: Thank you so much ali for saving her.
Ali: are you mad bro? What if she is not my gf atleast she is friend.
Neil: but Thank you ali.
Ali: I think I should go now and please take care of her.
Neil: okay ali bye. Once again thank you.
Then neil goes to their room and moves towards Avni. He sits beside her holding her hand. He is caressing her face and kissed het forehead.
Neil: please get up avni. I will never do such things from now. But please wake up for me. I cannot see you on this state. I am very bad husband. I was unable to fulfill the responsibilities of being an ideal husband. Please avni wake up. Shout on me, Beat me but don't sleep like this.Episode ends...
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In next episode there misunderstanding will be cleared.
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