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Short Story #1 - DECEPTION

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by Luna_M_Light

by Luna_M_Light

                                    
                                              

                          Book Title: DECEPTION
                          Author: nehajj1234
Description: Whom will you trust "Friendship or Love"? If you get a message from an unknown person, will you answer it or not? If yes then... This might change your life. What if you get involved in something worst? Like me. I still don't know my fault, but I am standing at the edge of death with friends and "who I love." This game is placed by my friend who is no more my friend but my death. The game of trust and betrayal begins... Only, if I can save her...

                          

                          Punctuation/Spelling: 8.7/10
                          Enjoyment: 9/10
                          Best Chapter: Prologue

                          Book Summary: The main character Jamie is on the hunt for a girlfriend when he gets a strange text from a girl named Lara. She isn't what she claims to be. Jamie's best friend Sam warns him to be careful. But can Jamie trust his friend?
                          Review: DECEPTION is a book about betrayal and love. From the very first chapter it has you begging for more. The book is filled with mystery and relatable characters. The book is like a Romance and Mystery. I'd say the best part of the book (not including the prologue) is Chapter 5: Trust whom... Friendship or Love. Chapter 5 is a set up for the climax but it can get a little confusing. At certain points during the book the story line can get confusing, some sentences don't make sense and others just have bad spelling. I would suggest going through the chapters and proof reading. Last thing. The characters aren't really built upon, they are given names but the only person we really get to understand as a character is Jamie. I believe adding a few more chapters would be beneficial, the chapters could be used to paint a picture of Lara and her personality or possibly of Sam.
                          

                          Would I recommend the book? Yes, absolutely.
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                          So this was my first review, I used to do them but that was a few years ago so if anyone has any recommendation on how I could edit my technique.