(Hello River Of Light here. I'll be testing something new with the writing, It would be nice if you can comment on your thoughts. Do you like the old way or this one? Anyways I hope you like this)
Y/N POV
OK this is a problem. We've been fighting this guy for awhile but he's not going down. Natsu and I have been BURNING through our magical container (Get It?)
"Hahahahaha! You are weaklings!" Shouted Zero. I light my fist in flames and ran at him. I try to punch him in the face but he leaned backwards and dodged it. He attacks back as I get launched backwards. You may be wondering how I'm not using my full power.
~Spoopy Flashback ~
"Y/n, I don't want you to use your full power unless its for an emergency" Mavis told me. I nod.
~End of the not so Spoopy Flashback~
I guess its an emergency so I was about to use my full power until Jellal enters the room. I don't know this person at all. "Natsu. Here is the golden flame. Eat it" said Jellal. 'Hmm I swear Jellal says more... The author is probably trying to end this Arc quicker' I mused. Then Natsu ate up the flame and grew stronger. Natsu charges at Zero as he fought him. I see Zero have a shocked face but then he fights back. I walk beside Jellal and pull out a bucket full of Popcorn as I watch the fight. Jellal looks at me.
"Where did you get that?" Said a confused Jellal. "Magic" I explained to him. He did not look amused. "Shouldn't you be helping him?" Questioned Jellal.
"He's fine" I told him. I offer popcorn to him. "You want some?" I quickly added.
"No I'm fine. Thank you." Jellal says. "Your loss" I said.
~Time Skip~
After Natau defeated Zero, we all destroyed the Lacrima at the same time. I am currently standing in place watching the group. I then feel a sudden pain in head. "Ah! What the hell?" I screamed out. I fall on my knees while clutching my head in pain, the others heard me as they run beside me. "Did You Forgot About Me?" The mysterious voice said in my head. "Who's there?!" The group look at me confused. Happy starts talking about something. "Wait why can't I hear you?" I ask confused. "Its because I blocked your hearing with magic" ??? Stated. "What do you want with me?" I asked Wendy uses her healing magic on me. "I'm going to..."
(Hey, RiverOfLight here. Now you have a choice on what this mysterious person wants.
1- The 'thing' corrupts your mind and makes you evil.
2- It wants to help you on your adventure
Your choice. By the way, did you like how I wrote this story, please tell me if you liked this one or the other one.
Bob runs towards Job and yells.
Bob: Hey Job!
Job: What?
Job questions as he looked at him.
Or
Bob runs towards job. "Hey job!" Bob yells. Job response with a question. "What?"
BYE!!!)
