Chapter 1: Falling Off Snake's Way

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Hello everyone here's the updated first chapter of this story.

EDIT 16/06/18: Over the next week I'm going to be going through and editing all of the chapters and changing a few details, just to make sure I'm not repeating myself and to fix a few facts and to make the story flow a bit better, thankfully I have already done the first 7 chapters on Ao3 making things a lot easier for me though I will likely go through and read them again and fix up any mistakes I find.

I have had quite a bit of trouble with this story when it comes to people leaving mean or hurtful comments, I allowed everyone to comment as that way I can reviews from people who don't necessarily have an account, those who have been with this story since the being will know I have some problems, most of which have been fixed. I will say though:

If you don't understand something about the story, go back and read through it again slowly to see if you missed something in one of the chapters. If you skip a chapter (or several) then you will likely end up incredibly confused. If there is a problem with the story, or I've made a mistake tell me though for the love of god do not comment without thinking first, particularly if what your saying isn't particularly nice.

It makes the Author feel horrible. If you do not have anything kind or constructive to say about my story then don't read or review it. Usually when I comment and find something wrong with a story I'll usually point it out to the Author in the nicest way possible.

Edit 19/08/18: I usually don't do this but considering these stories are quite good I thought I might as well put in a good word for my good friend Marlia_Gordon99 here on Wattpad, she recently posted two stories. Check them out and support her.

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Date: 31/08/15 – 17/04/16 Time: 9:11 am – 3:56 am

Goku had known it was a bad idea to fall asleep on the back of that cart as there was a chance he may end up in HFIL, but he had done it anyway. Then again if he hadn't fallen asleep then he never would have met his father and figured out what wife and best friend really thought of him and his two sons after finding out they weren't human.

Hang on. I'm getting ahead of myself, I should probably tell you how Goku ended up falling off of Snakes Way and meet his father and what effect that had on him and his family and exactly this small event lead to him finding out what his wife and best friend had been planning since they had found out he wasn't human after Gohan was born. I should really stop talking before I give away what happens before you've even started reading.

"Give me my milk. Just put the donuts over there..." Goku mumbled in his sleep, the cart driver fit a dump sending him flying straight towards HFIL. "Now why did you dump the donuts on my head," Goku woke with a start when he realised he was airborne. When finally pried his eyes open he found himself heading towards HFIL and no longer on Snakes Way

He woke with a start when he felt himself falling, remembering he was on Snakes Way and heading towards HFIL, he tried to stop himself but it was too late and was unable to stop himself from falling through the black clouds. Goku groaned when he hit something soft that certainly wasn't the hard rocky ground, he was startled when he heard a soft "Oomph" from under him.

"Hey, would you mind getting off me. I'm not a pillow," a deep smooth voice said from underneath him, it took Goku a few seconds to realise he had landed on someone and quickly got up. When he turned around to help the person up he saw the man was staring up at him with wide eyes, there was something familiar about him but didn't know why.

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