We've got an Ouran Highschool Host Club up in here y'all. It's by NatureGarden. For some reason I have a feeling this is going to be really good, and I haven't even opened it yet. Anyway, this review is supposed to be neutral so I'll be as... well, neutral as humanly possibly.
So y'all I just popped this sucker open in another tab and the first thing I see are these like, deadass beautiful, long, full paragraphs full of commas and periods, and now I want to cry. Yes, it is that time of the month, and yes, it is past midnight. Leave me be-
The imagery is flawless. I can see it happening in my head as I read it, which is exactly what authors should reach for when describing something. You've included enough details, but not too many, and it's a perfect balance. I knew it'd be good smh. This is more proof that yah boi is indeed psychic as hell.
By the way, this chick is the sister of the Hitachiin twins y'all, so we better watch out smh. It's a unique twist. I've only ready around three OHSHC fanfictions, but all of them have her related to Haruhi. I think I saw one where she was related to Tamaki, and maybe one relating to Kyoyo, but I'm not sure. Either way, this is unique af. Color me impressed.
Unique plot thus far. Let us continue.
The grammar tickles me in all my happy grammar places, by the way. It's impeccable. Plot so far is good, realistic, and it's already hooked me. Honestly though, I'd read anything with grammar and paragraph structure this good. That's real. Can I get a yo holla in the chat?
The summarize, she was hit by a bus when little and was living with an Aunt in New York. The Aunt died and she's free of any real medical issues, so she's moving back home. She's got an original personality. I smell no Mary Sues here.
WAIT SHE A TRIPLET TO THE TWINS MY BOIS GUYS THIS GOT SO MUCH BETTER I
Yes.
Anyway, uh, yeah. This is great. Keep up the good work. Plot's developing nicely, the character isn't a dumbass, and she isn't insanely hot. Overall, you've got a good story a brewin'
